The Secret Garden
The lake was sloshing,
making calming sounds.
The willows dancing in the wind.
The vines waving their welcome.
The Secret Garden was a place for peace.
Tuesday, December 5, 2017
Monday, December 4, 2017
The Black Hole (hydro slide)
"I cant do this", I said.
"OK, paths clear you can go now", said the lifeguard.
I run up the spiral stair case, dad just behind me.I reach the top. Dad was waiting for me to slip off.
"Er, dad you can go first."
"No."
"Yes",I said.
"Fine",he growled.
I wait until hes out.In a flash hes out!I step on to the slide gripping the steel bars.I let go.
Darkness appeared right in front of me. My stomach clenched.I wanted to be out but that would be impossible! Something wanted to be go out of my mouth,it was vomit.I started to panic!Light appeared.Water crashing! I crashed straight in!
My head bobbed out of the water.I was in... THE LAZY RIVER!
"Thank goodness that was over!"
Sunday, November 19, 2017
Tinkercad Bridge
Tinkercad Bridge
Me, Monika and Lulu decided to make this Tinkercad Bridge - its a truss bridge.Its strength is the triangle because when you put something on top the force pushes it down and then it goes straight so it doesn't bend or break. without the triangles it will bend and break because the triangles are the support!!We also put some supports under it so it can stand up!!
Me, Monika and Lulu decided to make this Tinkercad Bridge - its a truss bridge.Its strength is the triangle because when you put something on top the force pushes it down and then it goes straight so it doesn't bend or break. without the triangles it will bend and break because the triangles are the support!!We also put some supports under it so it can stand up!!
Tuesday, November 14, 2017
The young girl
I slipped into the carriage, hiding in my seat, afraid to go out! I jumped as I saw a pale lady sitting next to me. I opened my mouth to speak but just blurted out "Who are you".
She stared at me and said "Do you know the feeling of emptiness"?
I dont answer. A few moments later I said "Ye Ye Ye Yes"!
THE END!
Sunday, November 12, 2017
The strength and weaknesses of a bridge
Suspension bridge
Weakness:Earthquake can do bad damage to the bridge
Strength:Cables and iron chains
Arch Bridge
Weakness:Limited span
Strength:Higher Level of resistance
Beam bridge
Weakness:Concrete which isn't that strong
Strength:Road and length
Cantilever bridge
Weakness:Counterbalance,which supports another weight
Strength: Prestressed concrete
Thursday, November 9, 2017
Bird of paradise
The bright orange petals remind me of hot summer days.
It stands tall like a king of the garden.
All hail the king!
The bright light of the paradise bird brings light into the world.
Bird of paradise really is a true paradise!
Tuesday, November 7, 2017
THE CAT CAFE!!!!
It's about time we got our breakfast.The hot chocolate was warm,a cocoa cat face was swirling in the drink.Little marshmallows,pink then white, were bobbing in the warmth.Mew came from the other side I waited for everyone to stop eating.
"Can we go and see the cats now?"
"No its not time yet."
"Nooooo!"
The clock struck 10, it was about time we got to see the cats.
Some cats were sleeping,climbing,jumping, and scratching!Excitement was running through me.
"Mom I prefer wild cats more", I said in a soft voice.
"Oh", said Nan."This is AWESOME"!
1,2,3 a cat leaped up on to a bridge,just a tail length below the roof!I was shocked to see a cat do that!A white covered kitten was standing there,it's clear blue eyes gazing at me.The cat that leaped to the bridge came up to the white kitten, I could see it was a she-cat caring for the kitten.The board said the kitten's name,Cloud.
"Cute, look clouds sleeping".
"Who's Cloud", said Danika?
"It's the white kitten."
We slowly walked out ready to leave.
Bike Riding
I get my bike it still has training wheels "Dad can you take of my training wheels"?
"OK", dad said slowly taking of the wheels.I get on my bike,suddenly I fall off.As always "I give up, I hate this!"
Wednesday, October 25, 2017
School horror
School Horror
Dogs Cats Rule
"Uh bye mum",I said.
I slowly walked to my class.Someone went to me and said "Hi I'm Chloe do you want to hangout with us."
"Uh sure, I'm Clarissa."
Yes, I made some friends, at least thats what I think.
"BBBRRRIIINNG"!
Lunchtime.I'm to scared to eat with Chloe, no I'm not going to!I just sat there doing nothing.
Thursday, October 19, 2017
The Food
The Food
Oooooh,I grab the spinach. I look at Sky my chicken and ask "You will eat the spinach"?
"Bock bock bock"!
"I guess thats a yes".
I slowly begin to try and I couldn't. I just couldn't give Sky spinach. So I went to the other chickens. I gave them the spinach.
Spinach-None.Me-One!
Oooooh,I grab the spinach. I look at Sky my chicken and ask "You will eat the spinach"?
"Bock bock bock"!
"I guess thats a yes".
I slowly begin to try and I couldn't. I just couldn't give Sky spinach. So I went to the other chickens. I gave them the spinach.
Spinach-None.Me-One!
Thursday, September 28, 2017
My best friend (for about 8 years)
My best friend forever
"Brrrrriiinnnggg!"
Morning tea. I go and sit next to Karla. We are BFF's for like ever!
I finally decided to tell her,"Were removing to NEW ZEALAND and were going on the 24th of November!"
"NO, you cant leave!"
I sigh, I knew I shouldn't have said that.
I start speaking Afrikaans "Well ek moet dit doen mamma en pappa se ek moet!"
That means, well I have to do it mum and dad says I have to!
Tuesday, September 26, 2017
My garden
My garden
My garden is wonderful.
I feel like I can do anything in my garden.
Do you remember that time when the flowers and butterflies danced in joy.
The fountain makes a calming sound and birds chirp!
The enchanted garden
The enchanted garden
"Get out of the house",said mum!
I replayed crying "Its snowing,fine Iĺl just go"!
I walked into the garden a lump of snow was conferring a brown book. I picked it up seeing a symbol of a rose!
"Weird", I say!
I look in the book and write the date: 17AD Name: Judie Valentine Where:Alaska. Suddenly a wand poped up!
I looked in the book and chanted "Whispers of the night break the heart who chime", I chanted and transformed into a witch!
"MHA HA HA HA"!
To be continued...
Go to Salvinas blog for the next piece
Thursday, September 14, 2017
Why are the bites itchy?
Bee Stings
A bee sting is like poison slipping into your body. It will stay attached to you, dead, or fly away to it's final resting place. You might be wondering why bees sting they sting because they are afraid of you.
A bee sting is very dangerous a adult can be stung 1000 times and then die but a child can be stung 500 times before dying. Some stings aren't as painful then others. The venom doesn't come from the bees blood but is in a sack, if you scratch or clap it the venom will spread in your body... um... maybe I went to far.
This is a easy way to stay safe. If you see a bee don't wave your arms in the air and scream or it may sting you. If it stings try not to scratch it or push it because it will spread the poison in other parts of your body. So if you have a child please help them.
Why the sting hurts. The sting hurts because there are chemicals in the sack and then t starts to burning because of the chemicals traveling in your body.
Thursday, September 7, 2017
Hurricane Harvey
Hurricane Harvey
A hurricane is an intense tropical storm. Other names for a hurricane is a cyclone, typhoon and tropical storm. Hurricanes are extremely dangerous and the flood they cause are really bad.
Hurricanes form around warm oceans and tropical areas. Hurricanes use warm water as an energy source which means they only form in summer. They lose strength as they go on land. They happen between June and November in the Northern hemisphere.
The eye of the storm is between 3.2 kilometres in diameter to 320 kilometres but are usually about 48 kms. The weather around the eye is calm but the weather is mad maybe even crazy, around the eye. Do not even try to go near the eye because you're probably going to die because of the strong winds, rain and waves around the eye.
Hurricanes can be found in the Eastern Pacific Ocean. Did you know that hurricanes can be tracked by by weather satellites and radars closer to land. Hurricanes has been around for hundreds of years and every city it hit it killed a lot of people and caused a lot of damage. Hurricane Katrina killed over 1800 people, leaving no sorry for all the damage it has done, Hurricane Katrina was in the United States.
How you can be safe around a hurricane is to get to high grounds. Make sure you have all you're expensive things, pets and electrical things. Try to get a lot of food before the hurricane hits.
A hurricane is an intense tropical storm. Other names for a hurricane is a cyclone, typhoon and tropical storm. Hurricanes are extremely dangerous and the flood they cause are really bad.
Hurricanes form around warm oceans and tropical areas. Hurricanes use warm water as an energy source which means they only form in summer. They lose strength as they go on land. They happen between June and November in the Northern hemisphere.
The eye of the storm is between 3.2 kilometres in diameter to 320 kilometres but are usually about 48 kms. The weather around the eye is calm but the weather is mad maybe even crazy, around the eye. Do not even try to go near the eye because you're probably going to die because of the strong winds, rain and waves around the eye.
Hurricanes can be found in the Eastern Pacific Ocean. Did you know that hurricanes can be tracked by by weather satellites and radars closer to land. Hurricanes has been around for hundreds of years and every city it hit it killed a lot of people and caused a lot of damage. Hurricane Katrina killed over 1800 people, leaving no sorry for all the damage it has done, Hurricane Katrina was in the United States.
How you can be safe around a hurricane is to get to high grounds. Make sure you have all you're expensive things, pets and electrical things. Try to get a lot of food before the hurricane hits.
Wednesday, August 30, 2017
How energy is transferred states of matter
Gas is something you can't feel or see.
Liquid is something that can flow,drink and feel.
Solid is something that's really hard like bricks, ice and humans!
Gas can turn to a liquid a cloud can do that it gets water and the sun heats it and it makes it to heavy so it gives you liquid.
Solids can turn into a liquid like ice the sun melts it and it can make a liquid.
Water can turn into gas if you heat water in a pot it will make the water boil which can turn into a gas.
Sunday, August 27, 2017
How states of matter is transferred (a experiment)
THE EXPERIMENT
What you will need:
Oil pastels
Canvas
Hair dryer
Hot glue gun
How the experiment works
Step 1: Glue the oil pastels to the canvas.
Step 2: Use the hair dryer to melt the oil pastels.
Step 3: Watch how the oil pastels melt in to a liquid
The oil pastels are solid but if you use a hair dryer to melt it the oil pastels turn into a liquid but it will dry on the canvas to make a rainbow of you use a lot of oil pastels on one canvas!
What you will need:
Oil pastels
Canvas
Hair dryer
Hot glue gun
How the experiment works
Step 1: Glue the oil pastels to the canvas.
Step 2: Use the hair dryer to melt the oil pastels.
Step 3: Watch how the oil pastels melt in to a liquid
The oil pastels are solid but if you use a hair dryer to melt it the oil pastels turn into a liquid but it will dry on the canvas to make a rainbow of you use a lot of oil pastels on one canvas!
Thursday, August 24, 2017
The big race (not a real story)
I hit the ground,I try to go in front. "I didn't train for this!"Mud splatter on me, i want it off but at the same time i want to win the race."Almost there", i said in my head. Mum yelled" Go go go you can win!I believe in you!"The world starts to faint into darkness. Suddenly I fell right on the spot.I woke up not knowing where I am.The world came into focus,I wasn't on the grass,I wasn't at school, I was at a hospital",I said in my head!I have a lot of questions to ask my mum.My first question was "Did i win the race and where am I!"Mum said "You didn't win the race and you fainted!"
Wednesday, August 23, 2017
Sunday, August 6, 2017
The four main elements of earth
Air is wind witch we breathe. Fire destroys things and we use it for camps and for boiling water. Earth is is nature and all things that breathe. Water gives us rivers and seas we also drink water.
Solid, liquid and gas
Solid, liquid and gas
Solid is something that is hard and takes a lot of space!
Liquid is something that flows and it doesn't take much space!
Gas is something that you cant see or feel!
Tuesday, July 25, 2017
My trip to Zieta Park
There was muddy grass along the path and flowers with a huge sign. It said "welcome to Zieta Park."We look around and I found a blue slide, the colour reminding me of the sky. A path led to the top of the slide! The water was streaming down and it was as cold as ice! It was as high as a mountain! I went down as I went up I tumbled down and down! I screamed and yelled "help i need help!"Finally I stopped. I was relieved and I put my hand on my head. Blood was trickling down my back!
Tuesday, June 27, 2017
My Dog Molly
My Dog Molly
Molly is a white,pinkish with long hair dog. She has crystal clear blue eyes. Her paws are as soft as clouds.I know what's a pink dog? There is nothing like that! My grandpa said "she was experimented on"! Wow, what a grandpaish thing to say.
I loved going in her very big brown dog house. I slept on the orange flowery pillows and played and read stories to her. When I slept she came in the house I would cuddle her. I loved it because it was soft, and dark!
She was a cute dog and she loved meat and candy-yummy! I gave her the candy of course! She loved it! Even if it was bad for her!
By : Clarissa Erlank
Wednesday, June 7, 2017
Social Bees VS Solitary Bees
Social Bees include Honey Bees and Bumble Bees.They are usually known to make honey and wax within their hive.These bees sting when they feel their hive is in danger however because their stinger is barbed it is left behind and the bee dies after stinging.these beautiful bees live in a hive witch is ruled by a Queen bee.
Solitary Bee include Leafcutter Bees,Digger Bees,Carpenter Bees,and Mason Bees among the many.These Bees live alone and do not swarm.They rarely sting and are not aggresive making them safe around kids and pets.They do not live in collinies, do not live in a hive and are not ruled by a Queen.
Thursday, June 1, 2017
The time I was sick (when I was 3 or 2)
I walk through the hall suddenly something came out of my mouth!It looks like poo but it's not it's vomit!I scream my mum comes,she asks "what happened are you ok"? I said "I think so"!I eat,I go to get dressed but instead something came out of my mouth,it was vomit again!
I go to the hospital!I feel the pain when the needle pokes through me!The doctor gives me medicine,I vomited in my mouth,as I try to keep it in,I could not keep it in so I vomited in the doctors office!I don't like being sick at all! I go to my room in the hospital!I get teddies and presents!But I hate it I say to myself I hate it,I hate it
Thursday, May 4, 2017
ANZAC Day mood poem
ANZAC
ANZAC day is red like poppies
It tastes like blood and bully beef
It smells like bloody dead corps
The sounds of bombs going off
ANZAC day makes me feel sad for the soldiers
Tuesday, April 11, 2017
Character Description
My Grandma
Today I am at home, my Grandma is visiting soon, my Grandma is very nice, she lets us do what ever we want! She loves arts and crafts and we do too! I cant wait until she comes, she comes in one week. She lives in SA! She is visiting for 3 weeks!
She is good at every thing, such as arts and crafts.Do you know that she teaches elderly people to make crafts?She is a great Grandma!My Grandma always has a smile,she's a a great Grandma, a really great Grandma!Her name is Lynette she has blue eyes and we do too.She always wears flowers or owl clothes
When my Dad was little he had a pet cat. My Grandma loved the cat but they did not know that he was allergic to cats.This is what happen. My Dad could not hear anything so they took him to the doctor. The doctor said that my Dad was allergic to cats!So,they got a dog but when my dad married my mum, my Grandma also loved the dog. I did too but the dog died!
When we were in SA we did lots of arts and crafts and watched lots of TV!At her work everyone says she's so good she always calls us bokkie! She says "come here bokkie" or says "come here honey"!I love my grandma
Thursday, April 6, 2017
My pepeha
My pepeha
My mom's side Ko maintain te muanga
Mama-Mum-Charmaine Ko river te awa
Matamua-Me-Firstborn-Clarissa Ko Moraletapark te kura
Potiki-Sister-Lastborn-Danika Ko Erlank toku whanua
My dad's side Ko Clarissa toku ingoa
Kuia-Grandmother-Lynette Taku piha haapiiraa ko H26
Karo-Grandfather-Fanus Toku kaiako ko pahemo horthaw
Papa-Dad- Stephan Ahau haeremai mai SA
Tania-Sister-Danika
Monday, April 3, 2017
Swimming
The silvery sea, blinds me by it's crystal clear water. As I swim, it gets colder and colder. I freeze as I swim!
The next day at school during swimming it gets cold but I do not care. Next thing I know, it was the test to see if I can pass level 2!
The next day swimming was over for the year. We get our certificates. As I look to see if I passed, my mum gives me a hug. I look at it again, I see that I passed I yell "yay". I passed level 2!
Sunday, March 26, 2017
Save Our Bees More Than Just Honey
Save Our Bees
More Than Just
Honey!
We need bees because they pollinate our food!All sorts of fruit and vegetables are pollinated by honey bees,such as broccoli and squash,apples and almonds.Without them we would starve to death and we will be extincted so please help!Here is the problem!
Bees are disappearing because there are to many buildings!
New Diseases
Pollution
Pesticides
Climate Change
Habitat Loss
Why are bees are disappearing.Well I can tell you it's because we are building to many buildings!Bees pollinate our food and put food on our tables!Here are solutions.We need to get a place where bees can rest and work with no buildings!
Fun Facts Time!
Bees communicate by dancing!Bees vibrating is not from there wings its by there legs!They like colors such as Violet,Blue,green,bruin and yellow and withe and tats why they like flowers!
There are a Queen Bee,a Worker Bee and a Drones!A Queen Bee does make bees by laying eggs and she keeps the hive alive!A Worker Bee makes the honey and beeswax and helps feed babies!
A Drone makes the mating sound to meet the Queen Bee!
Honey is sweet,honey bees make honey and if there are to many they make beeswax out of it! Honey yummy!This is like this because I can't get it to move and it is the picture. why do we need bees Why we need bees
More Than Just
Honey!
We need bees because they pollinate our food!All sorts of fruit and vegetables are pollinated by honey bees,such as broccoli and squash,apples and almonds.Without them we would starve to death and we will be extincted so please help!Here is the problem!
Bees are disappearing because there are to many buildings!
New Diseases
Pollution
Pesticides
Climate Change
Habitat Loss
Why are bees are disappearing.Well I can tell you it's because we are building to many buildings!Bees pollinate our food and put food on our tables!Here are solutions.We need to get a place where bees can rest and work with no buildings!
Fun Facts Time!
Bees communicate by dancing!Bees vibrating is not from there wings its by there legs!They like colors such as Violet,Blue,green,bruin and yellow and withe and tats why they like flowers!
There are a Queen Bee,a Worker Bee and a Drones!A Queen Bee does make bees by laying eggs and she keeps the hive alive!A Worker Bee makes the honey and beeswax and helps feed babies!
A Drone makes the mating sound to meet the Queen Bee!Honey is sweet,honey bees make honey and if there are to many they make beeswax out of it! Honey yummy!This is like this because I can't get it to move and it is the picture. why do we need bees Why we need bees
Monday, March 13, 2017
The rain
The rain

The rain came in waves splattiring me like bulits,I scream in fear!The rain streams through my hair and down my neck.My clothes are soaked from the rain.The storm goes on and on hutting the car, I scream in fear!The car stops ,everyone look at me!suddenly the car starts to drive again.Everyone do not look at me I yell!Thunderstorms bigen I ran to the house I scream in fear!Fanily the rain stoped and a rainbow cames!!!

The rain came in waves splattiring me like bulits,I scream in fear!The rain streams through my hair and down my neck.My clothes are soaked from the rain.The storm goes on and on hutting the car, I scream in fear!The car stops ,everyone look at me!suddenly the car starts to drive again.Everyone do not look at me I yell!Thunderstorms bigen I ran to the house I scream in fear!Fanily the rain stoped and a rainbow cames!!!
Sunday, March 12, 2017
My weekend
My weekend
Saturday we invited our cosins and grandpa and grandma to a BBQ it was fun our grandpa and grandma left early and our cosins left late!It was lots of fun and we slept with our mom and dad!
Sunday we woked up and it was rainy I thought it was going to be doring but in dinner time we went to flagship!My sister wasted my dads money because she didnot eat her food but I did eat my food!It was lots of fun!
Saturday we invited our cosins and grandpa and grandma to a BBQ it was fun our grandpa and grandma left early and our cosins left late!It was lots of fun and we slept with our mom and dad!
Sunday we woked up and it was rainy I thought it was going to be doring but in dinner time we went to flagship!My sister wasted my dads money because she didnot eat her food but I did eat my food!It was lots of fun!
The Spinifex
The Sinifex
It dances with the wind swiftly.
It plays hide and seek it's hiding place is the dry sand and as it tumdles to the wet sand it's out of hiding!
As it past it lefts some straw like tenticals that folows me!
It is a beauty of nature and of god.
It dances with the wind swiftly.
It plays hide and seek it's hiding place is the dry sand and as it tumdles to the wet sand it's out of hiding!
As it past it lefts some straw like tenticals that folows me!
It is a beauty of nature and of god.
My Honey Bee poem
Honey Bee
The stinger pokes to
still
The wings protrude like a
plane
The eyes shimmer like the
sun
The tounge fall as it collects
poling
The stinger pokes to
still
The wings protrude like a
plane
The eyes shimmer like the
sun
The tounge fall as it collects
poling
Wednesday, March 1, 2017
A2-my learning muscles
My learning muscles
I need to work on Questioning and taking responsibility by practising my maths learning at home.
I do not have to be told the whole time what to do but sometimes I need to be reminded what to do.
I do not need to be told when I need to just my learning muscles but I do need sometimes to be reminded.

I am good with finishing my work on time.I do need to be reminded because I sometimes forget - home learning.I can not plan my week but I can plan my day. And that's why I think I am a self regulated learner!So I looked to the board and I seed that I am a Self Regulated Learner!
I need to work on Questioning and taking responsibility by practising my maths learning at home.
I do not have to be told the whole time what to do but sometimes I need to be reminded what to do.
I do not need to be told when I need to just my learning muscles but I do need sometimes to be reminded.

I am good with finishing my work on time.I do need to be reminded because I sometimes forget - home learning.I can not plan my week but I can plan my day. And that's why I think I am a self regulated learner!So I looked to the board and I seed that I am a Self Regulated Learner!
Monday, February 27, 2017
The cicada
The cicada
It looks similer to a bee but it's not.
It vlays in the air making a ratlsnake sond in the air.
Banging in my ear sor , tingiling my ear!
I look at it's shell saying eu!
It eceuse it is loud but I look in a tree it's not there I see it but I get there I see it's rubish,eu!
It's sound is a repiting patern!
It's like it's a spider climing on me!
It get out by it's wing's to form a cicada shell!
It's crab like legs cling to grip.
Can you geuss wat it is, if you geusst cicada you are rith!
It looks similer to a bee but it's not.
It vlays in the air making a ratlsnake sond in the air.
Banging in my ear sor , tingiling my ear!
I look at it's shell saying eu!
It eceuse it is loud but I look in a tree it's not there I see it but I get there I see it's rubish,eu!
It's sound is a repiting patern!
It's like it's a spider climing on me!
It get out by it's wing's to form a cicada shell!It's crab like legs cling to grip.
Can you geuss wat it is, if you geusst cicada you are rith!
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