Thursday, August 24, 2017

The big race (not a real story)



 I hit the ground,I try to go in front. "I didn't train for this!"Mud splatter on me, i want it off but at the same time i want to win the race."Almost there", i said in my head. Mum yelled" Go go go you can win!I believe in you!"The world starts to faint into darkness. Suddenly I fell right on the spot.I woke up not knowing where I am.The world came into focus,I wasn't on the grass,I wasn't at school, I was at a hospital",I said in my head!I have a lot of questions to ask my mum.My first question was "Did i win the race and where am I!"Mum said "You didn't win the race and you fainted!"       



4 comments:

  1. Thanks i work really hard on my stories

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  2. I'm glad this was not a real story. Love it though.

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  3. Thanks for all your nice comments!

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